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Students Ask: “Is it bad to start a college essay with a really short paragraph?”

Q: Would it be bad to start with a two-sentence paragraph? All the rest of my paragraphs are of normal length.

A: When it comes to the college admissions essay, capturing the attention of an admissions officer can be difficult.  An opening paragraph that challenges traditional writing conventions can be an effective way to stand out. That said, students shouldn’t break these rules without good reason. What does this short paragraph accomplish? Does it ask the reader a striking question? Does it inspire the reader to want to learn more? Would a third sentence (three is usually the least it takes to craft a solid paragraph) actually enhance the rhythm and weight of the first two statements? These are the kinds of questions you want to ask yourself before committing to a two sentence opener. Risks in writing do have rewards, but only if there is logic and impact to back up those choices.

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